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Would you fancy a pet like Freddy?

As I dived onto the bed, I angrily threw my bag to the floor. I had the worst day ever. Freddy-my pet hamster- listened intently as I talked about my atrociously horrid day. Ms Anne-aka angry Anne- was on my tail the whole day, I was a told off a million times. I was drowning in a pool of despair when I remembered that my school report card would be sent home today. This day could not get any worse. Or could it…

As Freddy adorably stared into my eyes, all the anger and dejection melted away. But of course, it was short lived and so Freddy started talking! Thoughts eddied through my brain like a whirlwind. Then Freddy scornfully said,” Oh shut up for once you idiot! Could you please for once talk about anything positive!” No way! Was it really possible? If so, how? Was it a dream? Slap! Nope. Definitely not! Sitting on my feet, Freddy angrily tugged at my school trousers. As insults bombarded me, deep and sharp pangs pierced my heavy heart.

As I went to the bathroom to calm myself down, Freddy snuck into the bathroom behind me. Underneath the toilet, he deviously schemed his next insult once more. As soon as I spotted him I picked him up from his hiding spot. I tossed him into the lubricious toilet and let him take his last breath. I flushed the toilet with a devious smile across my face. Admittedly, it did take me a few weeks to recover but eventually time worked its magic and I had completely forgotten about him. Until…

Three months later, he managed to slip away via the gutter hole!”What! Arrgh!” I screamed infuriated as I snatched him and took him to the bathroom. This time I threw in two of my baby brother’s diapers to make sure this toilet would be his tomb. Once I had told my mum about what happened, she suggested that I get a cat. She said that they eat rodents such as hamsters so the next day me and my mum went to the pet shop to buy a cat and we settled on a very playful Tom.

Once we had taken the cat home, I found Freddy lying on my bed, but this time my mum was there and told me to open the pet cage. As soon as I had the cat was chasing Freddy and it was like Tom and Jerry but this time Tom got his prize. Freddy was gone for good! I was free from Freddy horrid insults and I got a name for the cat, Tom.

Sumer Mundi

Sumer Mundi is a budding young writer who loved to plant the seeds of his unique and refreshing thoughts, idea and stories on paper from a very tender age of 6.He captured stories that sprouted from his innocent imagination, logged some fun moments in the form of diary entries and voiced some logical thoughts on the topics of his interest such as football,travel and food.This blog is his dream and passion to compile it all and take his readers along on this beautiful journey of his personal and creative growth.It’s a powerful time capsule of a very loving, kindest ,compassionate and creative boy…who is 9 years old currently. Some of his writings included here are written by him when he was 6-7 year old as well as recent ones.

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